Thursday, August 27, 2009

Flash Friday 55

before leaving for the airport, adam dropped the money off at the drop off point. Keeping only enough for his flight. 'I can't go back', He thought. 'They won't harm her now'.
Adam rushed to the counter to check in. Suddenly something made him turn his head.
It was Eve. Eve is going to Hawaii.

Previous the 1st story is -- (A quick synopsis)
a man running down the street , sweat covering his brow, he ran into a building, feeling his heart beating , he went to a corridor where there were less people and calmed down. he felt the envelope in his pocket and he could feel that the money was still there

2nd installment
the phone rang and she felt fearful.
he apologized for calling so late.
she waited to hear the news. He quietly said "I have the money".
Choking up, she said, "Thank God".
"it's ok, I am coming home."he said
"no matter what, I am here for you", she replied.
And he said, "I know".

3rd post
He arrived home later than he expected.
The house is dark.
Where could she be? she knew I was coming.
She said she'd be there no matter what.
The door was open a crack. she'd never leave the door open.
Something is wrong.
He listened for sounds but only heard the deafening sound of silence.

4th post
As Adam entered, he flicked the familiar light switch to on.
He dropped his keys on the table and cautiously entered further in to the house.
His gut told him what happened as did the note hanging on the bedroom door.
The note read, "return the money if you ever want to see her again."

5th post
Adam knew what he should do. The problem is he also knew what he really wanted to do.
Life is so hard. 'Why can I Never catch a break', Adam wondered? I have 800,000 dollars in my pocket. I could go anywhere. I could do anything.
Adam picked up the phone and dialed the number.

6th post
Adam listened to the ringing...thinking maybe he should change his mind.
The voice on the other line answered "United Airlines, can I help you?"
Still questioning his choice, he nearly hung up the phone.
"Can you tell me when the next flight to Stockholm is? I need a one way ticket for Adam Smith."


  1. Woot...wonder if I can meet Eve. Excellent 55 my friend. I love this story. Such mystery involved :)

  2. I forgot to go into the website and let people know I played! I just remembered now,,,gawd..I am such a twit.
    you guys kill thanks for visiting! LOL

  3. The mind is a terrible thing to waste Lani!
    I bet you'll remember next week...hehehe
    Excellent 55 albeit a bit late...
    Thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and enjoy whats left of your week-end....G


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